Chapter 3
That message appeared, and the chat went quiet for two minutes.
Then messages started flying.
"I smell it too." "Why is no one fixing the power?" "Elevator's out, stairs are dark. Anyone checking?" "My husband just opened the door—hallway's full of smoke!"
Olive sat on the hotel bed, fingers stiff. She called management. No answer.
She called 911. The dispatcher asked for her address and if she was still in the building.
Olive glanced at Hazel. "We've already left. Please send someone. There are still many residents inside."
Hazel sat by the window, knees hugged to her chest. She hadn't slept. Since they checked in, she hadn't drunk a sip or said a word.
The sky slowly brightened.
White light spread across the window. In the distance, sirens started—first one, then many. Olive stood at the window and saw red-and-blue lights near their building.
Fire trucks blocked the whole street. People were being carried out.
Some sat on the ground with blankets. Some cried, some yelled, some filmed with their phones.
Olive's legs went weak.
If Hazel hadn't woken her, they'd be in that building now. Seventeenth floor. No power. No emergency lights. Stairwells full of smoke.
She remembered the men in the stairwell. The words: "The unit on seventeen... its door is open."
She clutched her phone and called 911 again.
This time she told them everything she'd heard. The dispatcher told her to stay put.
By 7:46 AM, the neighborhood chat had exploded.
Someone posted video from the scene. The electrical room door was black with soot. Walls peeling. Firefighters dragged out melted cables.
Someone cried in voice messages.
"We almost didn't get out on six!" "The stair door was taped shut!" "Who the hell messed with the fire doors?" "Why were the emergency lights out?" "Where's management?"
Olive stared at the word "taped" and felt sick.
Not an accident. At least not entirely.
Hazel finally moved.
She reached for Olive's phone and scrolled up the chat.
To 2:58 AM. No one was talking then. Further up, a notice from management at 11:30 PM: "Short routine line check tonight, won't disturb residents."
Olive frowned. She hadn't seen that notice. Hazel tapped on the management profile, then on the image attached to the notice.
It had the management's red stamp. Looked fine. Hazel zoomed in on the bottom right corner. A tiny line of text:
"Please cooperate with unit on seventeen for in-person confirmation."
Olive froze. "What does that mean?" Hazel didn't answer. She kept scrolling. Someone asked why only seventeen. Management didn't reply.
At 11:57 PM, a resident posted: "Anyone home in seventeen?" No one answered. Olive remembered clearly. They were both asleep by eleven.
She hadn't checked the chat. No one knocked. Those two men were coming for them.
At 8:30 AM, police came to the hotel.
A young officer named Hobbes, and an older one, Captain Morrison. Captain asked in detail. Time of outage. Escape route. How many voices in the stairwell. Any faces. Olive answered everything. When it was Hazel's turn, Captain softened his voice.
"Why did you tell your mom to leave?"
Hazel kept her head down. "I was scared." Captain didn't push. He placed a photo on the table. It showed the security desk.
The key box was open, one spare key missing. "You knew the keys were there?"
Hazel looked up. "I'd seen them before."
Captain watched her for a few seconds, then swapped to another photo. This one was from the seventeenth-floor hallway camera.
Timestamp 2:49 AM. A figure in a black jacket stood at the end of the hall. His face was hidden under a hat. He was raising his hand to knock on their door.
Olive's breath caught. Hazel didn't look at the photo.
She stared at the time stamp. "Did you see this person?"
Captain asked. Hazel shook her head. Olive whispered, "Did he knock?" Captain took the photo back. "The camera cut at 3:00 AM. Nothing after."
Olive looked at her wrist, still marked from Hazel's nails.
She suddenly asked, "Out of so many people in that building, why were we the only ones who ran early?"
The room went quiet. Hazel's shoulder twitched.
Captain looked at her too. "Kid, do you know something?"
Hazel lifted her head. Her eyes were bloodshot.
"Mom. It's not that I knew to run. It's that I've already died in that building once."